Dear Ms.
Brannon
I know that I am far from being the best writer and far
from being the student you brag about. However, I know that I am trying and I
have proved that I am trying through my essays and my homework assignments.
Beginning your class was hard for me, its not easy coming to a class where it
seems as if all your effort and progress doesn't matter. In my previous English
classes I was excelling and receiving 90s and above, but once I stepped foot
in your class I realized that I am not
getting those grades anymore. At first I wanted to give up, but I wanted to
prove to myself that I belong in this class that is why I believe that I
deserve a 85 average.
I know that I have put in a great amount of effort and
you can see that through my homework assignments. I am always present to your
class, and I know that my friends and I talk a lot in your class (don’t take it
personal we are always talking) but that hasn't stopped me from getting my work
done. I have handed in all my homework,
my essays and I always take responsibility for my own actions. Just so
you know, it is not easy coming to a class where it feels as if your opinion doesn't matter. I know I have not
reached the point in my writing where I write at a college level or
interpreting the assignment as a college student. However, many times I may
interpret something wrong, or that may seem wrong to you but correct to me but
its my opinion. I understand that you have to correct me but the way you do it
sometimes seems as if you are judging me. I know you mean well, but that is why
I tend to keep my answers to myself and hardly participate.
Also, sometimes when I feel that I am taking one step
closer I end up taking two steps back. I know that’s how it goes sometimes and
I am working on it. My efforts are there and I am proving that I deserve to
take this class everyday. I put a lot of time into this class, sometimes I
would only do your homework and fall asleep
after 1o’clock. I think, no I know I deserve a 85 due to all my hard work.
No comments:
Post a Comment